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  • Mood: I Have To Pee
  • Listening to: SOMETHING
  • Reading: Fanfiction
  • Watching: Music Videos of my OTP
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Alriggggghtttttt.
I'm sleepy but let me just type this out and then get back to writing Princess Red; More Days.

Before I go ahead to kill myself with writing about fifteen fanfiction about my OTP (RedxGreen) let me give you a preview of some of the stories I'm writing.


Princess Red; More days.
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    Green harshly stabbed his crayon on his paper and started to draw, except with his harshness, the crayon broke. So the boy beside him with red eyes picked up the pieces of the broken crayon then threw it away. Red returned to his seat to draw his own drawing. Green grumbled on how breakable crayons don't like him. Finally after getting tired of complaining, he began to draw whatever was on his mind. In the end, Green drew crayons fighting crayons. Red drew the shapes of the starter Pokemon Professor Oak handed out. When Green peeked at Leaf's paper, he saw nothing. What happened next was a fight of blankness and snow.

For once, the three children went to Green's house. Leaf pouted as Red sat beside Green. Green stuck out his tongue at her, starting another fight. Red slapped them on the cheeks lightly. "Stop," he said bluntly causing Leaf and Green to rub their reddening cheeks. Nobody talked for a while until Leaf spoke up as she played with her brown hair, "So how was your halloween?" Green's head perked up, "It was great! I dressed up as an Eevee and Red dressed up as..." The boy turned to Red who rolled his eyes "Pikachu," he said with a sigh. Leaf swatted Red on the back affectionately and he winced. "Pikachu are adorable!" Then Green's eye twitched in annoyance that only Red caught.

Green tried to find Red and Leaf who seemed to be hiding. They were playing hide 'n' seek outside Green's house. He stomped around the neighborhood searching for his friends. It wasn't before long he had found Leaf, who was giggling very loudly behind the bush. The boy glared at Leaf, before heading off to find Red.


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Now we'll just. . . Go ahead to my other fanfiction now.


Memories; The scene.
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   Red had his head in his hands, shivering as the same horrible scene repeated in his hurt mind. He wanted to scream loudly but wouldn't that bother his sleeping pokemon? Yes, it would, since they heard it so much already.

Pikachu stirred from his dreams as he sleepily glanced at his trainer. The rodent realized that Red had another dream, the dream that wouldn't leave his thoughts, the one that scarred him. Unfortunately, Pikachu wasn't there when Red was there. Pikachu however, knew what it was, as he and Red connected in strange ways. Red's eyelashes fluttered as he blinked, more than once every time. The boy felt like throwing up, his dreams or memories weren't that great, it was far from it. Pikachu noticed Red's appearance, different. Pikachu recalled their childhood days.

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NEXT.



Can't hold back; Keep smiling
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   Red liked to oversleep, so that's how his morning went. He currently lived in Viridian city since Pika liked it so much since it was close to Viridian forest. Sometimes, Yellow and Blue visited for no reason. Blue would clumsily drop something and bend over, then drop it again and bend over. Perking an eyebrow up, "Is your hands slippery?" He asked curiously each time. Blue facepalmed and sighed dejectedly, and Yellow was looking at the wall pink faced. The girls would leave right after, saying goodbye. Well, it wasn't a day when Blue and Yellow came over. Today, Green was supposed to come over to check his health, and request from Professor Oak.

Green ringed on the doorbell, hearing no movement on the other side, he unlocked the door and stepped in. He looked around the room, feeling disgusted. Most of Red's Pokémon were sleeping and the rest were eating their heads off, mostly Snor. He grew more attentive to the whole room. Dust was everywhere, along with muddy floors, with dirty curtains. He raised his fist trying to manage his anger. After all, he was the one owner who bought and is paying for the house.



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NEXXXXXXXXXXXXXTTTTT.


Darn you Pikachu; Carnival
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   Green had taken his dear Red to the carnival. No, they weren't in a relationship. They were in a bittersweet rivalry that was it. Although Green might have a small crush on him, Red was too oblivious to know anyways. His friend wouldn't stop annoying him about the carnival. Every other dex holders just had to be out of town, they must have been laughing at him somewhere, and he knew it. Blue would be being the pervert she is, floating everywhere just to get pictures of them two together. The others would be waiting for the pictures. Oh how much Green wanted to kill Blue right now, she pestered him nonstop to at least fulfill her fantasy. Wait, Blue has fantasies of them two? Who in the world would want to have dreams of two boys together? Apparently Blue did.

Red snapped him out of his mind, two balloons covering his face. He pushed the balloon out of the way before he realized that the balloon was red and green, "Red, where'd you get these balloons from?" His question was ignored as Red just dumbly smiled. Red tied his respective colored balloon onto his wrist very loosely; it could have flown away by now. Green refused to tie an annoying balloon on his, so he tied it on Red's other wrist no matter how many complaints Red gave. Pika had gone off to find something to catch his interest; obviously, Red and Green were standing about.





What am I doing giving everyone previews of my fanfiction. ASDFGHJKL. Oh. Uhm. Here's one more.



What is; Red?
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   "Get out!" Shouting at the walls didn't help entirely, though; it did help in the smallest bit. He was miserable in the lonely freezing room called life, alone with faceless moving bodies. The only one who wandered into his room, was nobody else than Red, the color of fresh blood and passion. Maybe even, the word he loathed so much, the emotion called love.
Red spilled blood, when Green harshly slapped him for inviting himself in. Red has passion in his battles with his loyal Pokémon he treated as best friends, caring when they got hurt. Overall, he showed love to each one of his Pokémon under his care.

Sometimes, Green felt like hitting his silent rival, who used to be his childhood friend, until he couldn't move. The questions raced around in mind, where was Red and what is he doing now? His rival had disappeared after quickly defeating his pride when he was defeated for his title, Pokémon Champion.











ALRIGHT. NO MORE. >:C Any suggestions how to make them better in comments please? Now be right back. (Reason is in the current mood. ^v^;;)
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!Mistpaw11 Feb 13, 2012  Student
Dude, don't u dare talk to me!!! Anymore. Don't reply.

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Oh little child, why did you post this on my JOURNAL? Wouldn't it make sense to just put it on my DEVIANTART page? Tsk tsk.

I replied, because you put it HERE. Noting me would have make me tempted to reply but wouldn't. Putting a comment on a UPDATE JOURNAL however. . .

First, let me teach you some fun facts! How fun.
Listen up, you'll need this for the future since schools are horrible.

"Dude, don't u dare talk to me!!! Anymore. Don't reply."

This would be much better: "Don't talk to me anymore! DON'T REPLY if you dare."

I know you want to look smart by using proper sentences, but using them correctly makes a better flare. You do not put u to replace you, it's not that hard to put y and o.

Anyways, I'm happy to rant with you further if you like.
I'm always here.
-Fur

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~wahlaomel Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist
I actually haven't gotten the chance to sit down properly and read Princess Red yet; the idea seems lovely though ;A;

The scene is really cute and I enjoy the idea of Red being so popular :icondignitylaughplz: Concerning the little excerpt that you just shared here, I do have some advice.

Uhuhuhu, don't bother taking it too seriously though; I'm a really bad critique and just ignore me if you think it's annoying, haha.

First and foremost, the interactions between all three, Leaf, Green and Red, are all natural which is wonderful but, the thing is, it feels as if you're listing events. He did this and then this happened etc. You might want to space out your events with imagery or details (not too detailed though!) to reduce such an effect.

For example: Leaf pouted as Red sat beside Green ; he always chose that jerk over her and it was irking. To add to her already rising annoyance, said jerk stuck out his tongue at her. She smirked; now he was asking for war and who was she to say no? Red narrowed his eyes at the starting fight. The two constantly were bickering and he wished that they would just stop for once; make a peace treaty and avoid a world war. Sighing, he quickly rose to slap both on the cheeks lightly. "Stop," he said bluntly causing Leaf and Green to rub their reddening cheeks.

Something like that. Details and more of the characters thoughts/ emotions to give the story a bit more flow.

But yeah, great job! (y)

/slinks off/

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^v^
I like to keep my stories very simple and leave it up to the readers. Sorry for the confusionnnn.

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